Mm Mmm, Good.
These kind of tracks are great to listen to. I love the piano melody in the dance/trance songs. One of my favorite genres. The only thing that bothered me a little bit was the lead that came in at 00:16. It needs to be a bit smoother and clean. I can't quite find the right word for it but it's as if there is a small amount of phlegm in someones throat when they talk, if that makes sense. Unless this was intended, try listening for the clarity of instruments in some future audio. (Just something to keep in mind). Otherwise, sweet job!
-Thumbsupguy